Hms Belfast

banehawi (Critique Team)

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12 Jun 2012 - 3:39 AM

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Its quite a decent shot Robert I like the pov this is taken from. My late Uncle served as a gunner on this ship during the Korean War.

A few suggestions. The shot is not level and needs a clockwise rotation. Its a little flat, typical of a small compact, and with a little work on contrast it gives the shot some life.

A little sharpening completes the tweaks, and all this is included in the mod.

if you are familiar with Levels in Photoshop. and you look at levels , you can drag both end sliders inwards to meet the graph which gives it a boost.


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regards



Willie

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paulbroad

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12 Jun 2012 - 7:27 AM

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Not the Belfast - the Belfast is moored near the tower in London and is a cruiser with 12 six inch guns. A decent image but the weather conditions do not help and there is a little under exposure. Brighten things up a bit for a big improvement. The river bank makes it look like there is a slope, but looking at the ship, I think all is OK in that department.

Paul

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