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Would like any help that can be given on the picture composition etc any points more than welcome. The photo is untouched in photoshop or other photo editing software so any ideas more than welcome thanks

Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony A350
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:21 Sep 2009 - 12:48 AM
Focal Length:55mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.6
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Landscape
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:The bridge
Username:yamahaman yamahaman
Uploaded:18 May 2012 - 10:17 PM
Tags:Harrogate, Landscape / travel
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susanbarton
susanbarton e2 Member 6susanbarton vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
18 May 2012 - 10:27 PM

Excellent shot good focus and detail throught, good composition with the little boat in the first arch an almost 3D effect, great work

Susan

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lostnspace2011
18 May 2012 - 10:36 PM

Welcome to EPZ Robert. I do like this, lots of detail and composition looks good to me Smile

Mark

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jdinne
jdinne e2 Member 10jdinne vcard England
18 May 2012 - 11:15 PM

There is not much wrong, there is plenty of good colour and detail, the composition is good.

Two things I have noticed, the bridge looks slanted to the right ( this is something I am always being told about) a twist ccw would sort this.

Also and this might be a bit picky, where the image meets the background above the centre arch and then above the tree line, it seems to flood/blend. A solution to this would be a different background, Black?

Rgds

John

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Quote: There is not much wrong, there is plenty of good colour and detail, the composition is good.

Two things I have noticed, the bridge looks slanted to the right ( this is something I am always being told about) a twist ccw would sort this.

Also and this might be a bit picky, where the image meets the background above the centre arch and then above the tree line, it seems to flood/blend. A solution to this would be a different background, Black?

Rgds

John

I also agree and I would have waited till the boat was closer but that's just me, welcome to EPZ

John

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tonyguitar
19 May 2012 - 5:42 PM

Looked at this yesterday and so today I think there is a solution. Too much of a good thing.

Crop in from the right up close to the third pillar and crop 2/3rds of the greenery from the left side and remove a narrow strip from the bottom.

This brings your attractive but large subject forward with improved simplicity and clarity. TG

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