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recent pic up for crit taken in Glasgow museum of modern art so what is wrong

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 60D
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:19 May 2014 - 2:26 PM
Focal Length:17mm
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/160sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:1000
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Manual
Title:A MUSE MENT
Username:youmightlikethis youmightlikethis
Uploaded:5 Jun 2014 - 6:02 PM
Tags:Black & white, Photo journalism, Portraits / people, Specialist / abstract
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10822 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2821 Constructive Critique Points
5 Jun 2014 - 6:33 PM

Nothing. Its really good.



Regards


Willie

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dudler
dudler Critique Team 1195 forum postsdudler vcard England284 Constructive Critique Points
5 Jun 2014 - 10:41 PM

I wonder if questions should always be challenging, and arguably confrontational?

I like this - though I am sure that there are holes one could pick. But would doing so, when the result is a good picture, be much to the point?

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youmightlikethis
youmightlikethis e2 Member 121010 forum postsyoumightlikethis vcard Scotland
6 Jun 2014 - 3:55 AM

thanks for crits and comments

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Coast
Coast Critique Team 6943 forum postsCoast vcard United Kingdom290 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jun 2014 - 7:30 AM

Ian - this is a fine picture you have created with a suitable title. As Willie and John have said, there is little to critique and any changes would not be because anything is wrong but around personal preference. Lots of good technique on display here such as the composition, choice of format and presentation.

If I were to play around with the processing side of this I'd experiment a little with the tonality. Not to change it much, if at all from this here, but just to see the effect of increasing contrast, decreasing contrast, deepening the blacks.... Only to settle on what would work best for me, which, would very likely be not different to your presentation.

Good work. A bit different from your street photography although in the same vein of candid portraiture however presented in a very thoughtful way. One of your best I think.

Regards
Paul

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom845 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jun 2014 - 8:40 AM

Yes, effective. Would leave it as is.

Paul

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