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does this work if not how can I improve it could it do with a closer crop

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 450D
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:26 May 2013 - 10:43 AM
Focal Length:60mm
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/4000sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:a picture of emotions
Username:youmightlikethis youmightlikethis
Uploaded:20 Apr 2014 - 8:47 PM
Tags:Black & white, General, Photo journalism, Portraits / people, RACE FOR LIFE 1 450D 60MM MACRO
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10933 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2947 Constructive Critique Points
21 Apr 2014 - 12:36 AM

Its a very nice shot Ian. I think the desire for a closer crop may be to remove or minimize the lady behind on the left. But you dont have much space for a crop. Maybe blurring is a useful alternative.



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Willie

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youmightlikethis
youmightlikethis e2 Member 121021 forum postsyoumightlikethis vcard Scotland
21 Apr 2014 - 3:59 AM

thanks for crit

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paulbroad
paulbroad  782 forum posts United Kingdom875 Constructive Critique Points
21 Apr 2014 - 8:36 AM

You should have either all or none of the lady on the extreme right. The tonal range is good on this one.

Paul

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