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one for the bin me thinks too much grab and not enough shot

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 450D
Lens:60mm f/2.8-32
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:26 Apr 2014 - 1:12 PM
Focal Length:60mm
Aperture:f/4.0
Shutter Speed:1/90sec
Exposure Comp:-1/2
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:DOGDAY AFTERNOON
Username:youmightlikethis youmightlikethis
Uploaded:27 Apr 2014 - 7:33 PM
Tags:Black & white, General, Humour / fun, Photo journalism, Portraits / people
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Mollycat
Mollycat e2 Member 1Mollycat vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
27 Apr 2014 - 9:23 PM

I'll take the one of the left.

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Daisymaye
Daisymaye e2 Member 5Daisymaye vcard Canada9 Constructive Critique Points
28 Apr 2014 - 1:04 AM

The only thing that bothers me is that you've chopped off a head. And the tops of a few other heads. Love the look on the real dog looking at the sculpture dog. Like the little girl too. I don't think V2 helps. If this is a crop at the top I'd put a bit back in the shot.

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youmightlikethis
youmightlikethis e2 Member 121011 forum postsyoumightlikethis vcard Scotland
28 Apr 2014 - 3:53 AM

thanks

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom850 Constructive Critique Points
28 Apr 2014 - 8:26 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Too much going on again, Ian. Too many distractions. I prefer the mono as the colour version is a touch flat, but your processing on the mono is a bit obvious and patchy. Particularly obvious is your dodging on the main figure which spills out round him. You need to use an much enlarged image and a smaller brush.

Paul

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mrswoolybill Critique Team 7417 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1001 Constructive Critique Points
28 Apr 2014 - 3:58 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Very funny observation, my sort of take on life. I'll stick with V1, the crop in V2 is too tight, the image isn't sharp enough on the dogs or the man to support such a close crop.
Moira

Last Modified By mrswoolybill at 28 Apr 2014 - 4:00 PM

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