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old waverley trip pic taken somewhere in middle of nowhere

Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:IF WISHES WERE FISHES
Username:youmightlikethis youmightlikethis
Uploaded:12 Apr 2012 - 7:47 PM
Tags:Black & white, General, Landscape / travel
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saeidNL
saeidNL  4 Netherlands3 Constructive Critique Points
12 Apr 2012 - 7:51 PM

Beautiful images,V1 is for me,today,
saeid

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Philip_H
Philip_H  2 United Kingdom
12 Apr 2012 - 8:09 PM

Love the sharper contrasts and greater range of tones in V1. Wonderful composition btw and a great arty feel and quality.

P.

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Jestertheclown
12 Apr 2012 - 8:56 PM

I'll go against the grain, (sorry!)
I prefer V2.

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ams99
ams99 Junior Member 365 forum posts England9 Constructive Critique Points
12 Apr 2012 - 9:15 PM

Version 2 nails it for me.

Cracking effort

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Leilani
Leilani  929 forum posts England3 Constructive Critique Points
12 Apr 2012 - 9:36 PM

V1 is much more striking! Lovely Smile

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Sooty_1 Critique Team 41176 forum posts United Kingdom196 Constructive Critique Points
12 Apr 2012 - 9:48 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I like both for different reasons. V2 looks like an old albumen print, whereas V1 is more like newsprint, ie Tri-X push processed and printed hard.

I also like the fact that they break most of the rules. The horizon is almost central, there is no defined foreground interest, the leading lines lead away from the subject, the shot is way too contrasty and sharpened for a landscape shot and the "grain" almost overpowers the rest.

On the other hand, the shot is moody, atmospheric and....different. You usual treatment of sky and contrast works in this case, adding to the effect rather than destroying it.

Nick

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janeez
janeez e2 Member 51174 forum postsjaneez vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
13 Apr 2012 - 12:21 AM

Either version is fine to me but I would look closely at the composition. The spire of the church is very central and may benefit from being slightly to one side. I would crop the RHS to the large tree and mak this my full stop if you like. As these image are quite grainy the addition of a border would be good to give a feeling of age to the overall effect.

Last Modified By janeez at 13 Apr 2012 - 12:22 AM

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janeez
janeez e2 Member 51174 forum postsjaneez vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
13 Apr 2012 - 12:31 AM

Mod uploaded

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youmightlikethis
youmightlikethis e2 Member 111003 forum postsyoumightlikethis vcard Scotland
13 Apr 2012 - 4:11 AM

thanks for crits and mod

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