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how could I improve this shot of tourists outside a museum

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 450D
Lens:28.0 - 105.0 mm (35 mm equivalent: 44.9 - 168.6 mm)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:31 Aug 2013 - 1:34 PM
Focal Length:38mm
Aperture:f/11.0
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:-1/2
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Evaluative
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:lost
Username:youmightlikethis youmightlikethis
Uploaded:16 Apr 2014 - 6:34 PM
Tags:Black & white, General, Photo journalism, Portraits / people
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Daisymaye
Daisymaye e2 Member 5Daisymaye vcard Canada9 Constructive Critique Points
16 Apr 2014 - 6:41 PM

I think this is really good. I can feel for them being lost. I may have cropped just a bit more off the right up to her arm. And burned a touch on his socks, they are a bit bright and draw the eyes. But I love the feeling in this.

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Mollycat
Mollycat e2 Member 1Mollycat vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
16 Apr 2014 - 8:39 PM

How do you burn socks !

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10849 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2841 Constructive Critique Points
16 Apr 2014 - 9:51 PM

This is very good Ian, well done.

The conversion is quite good, and the amplification of noise by cropping so much works for me. In fact, in the mod, I added a bit more.

Since its zoomed in, the exposure will need to be adjusted, as the camera set its exposure with the larger scene. Its quite a bit underexposed, despite that coat, the mans hair, and the the socks being very bright.


So thats the suggestion and the mod, brighter overall except for the brighter parts mentioned above.


Regards



Willie

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youmightlikethis
youmightlikethis e2 Member 121012 forum postsyoumightlikethis vcard Scotland
17 Apr 2014 - 4:03 AM

thanks for crits and mods

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cats_123 e2 Member 104018 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland25 Constructive Critique Points
17 Apr 2014 - 8:05 AM

like the situation and the poses...have had a go at a tighter 1x1 crop Grin

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