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ok took your advice and held back on the edit no tonemapping

Brand:Olympus
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Focal Length:23mm
Aperture:f/10.0
Shutter Speed:1/250sec
ISO:250
Flash:On, Did not fire
Title:shooting the wait and clean pair of heels
Username:youmightlikethis youmightlikethis
Uploaded:8 Mar 2014 - 4:28 PM
Tags:Black & white, General, Photo journalism, Portraits / people
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paulbroad
paulbroad  789 forum posts United Kingdom880 Constructive Critique Points
8 Mar 2014 - 5:04 PM

We shall see what others say, but I really would kick that tone mapping into toch and bring it out when it is really needed. The mono here is just so much better to look at. Unfortunately, 4 very different shots and I prefer them one at a time. V2 looks a bit flat and under exposed, but the right edge looks OK.

In v1, the matching mono, I would thus crop the right to remove the brighter bit, but I like both v1 and 3. V4 is a bit general, a wider record image.

Paul

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Mollycat
Mollycat e2 Member 1Mollycat vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
8 Mar 2014 - 5:21 PM

Like the starkness in 1.

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mrswoolybill Critique Team 8529 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1094 Constructive Critique Points
8 Mar 2014 - 6:20 PM

I'm just looking at V1, it's the lead image and the strongest here for me. I have mixed feelings about your b&w processing. It produces a certain flatness but also a formal, print-like feel. The formality works well with the composition.

It's an intriguing image. Three figures totally isolated. I'm seeing three different compositions in one, I'd like to turn them into a triptych but as they overlap I'm not sure that that will be possible. I'm off to try it out...
Moira

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youmightlikethis
youmightlikethis e2 Member 121312 forum postsyoumightlikethis vcard Scotland
8 Mar 2014 - 6:55 PM

thanks for crits and mod

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vickyf
vickyf e2 Member 9vickyf vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
9 Mar 2014 - 5:50 PM

Great set. I have a particular liking for V3 & your B&W processing is wonderful.

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