Login or Join Now

Upload your photos, chat, win prizes and much more

Username:
Password:
Remember Me

Can't Access your Account?

New to ePHOTOzine? Join ePHOTOzine for free!

SHOOTSTANDWALKYAWN

Join Now

Join ePHOTOzine, the friendliest photography community.

Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more for free!

PRIZES GALORE! Enter The ePHOTOzine Exclusive Christmas Prize Draw; Over £10,000 Worth of Prizes! Plus A Gift For Everybody On Christmas Day!
Add Comment

Edinburgh street shot does it work if not why not

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 60D
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:24 May 2014 - 12:05 PM
Focal Length:60mm
Aperture:f/3.2
Shutter Speed:1/1250sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Manual
Title:SHOOTSTANDWALKYAWN
Username:youmightlikethis youmightlikethis
Uploaded:25 Jul 2014 - 6:42 PM
Tags:Black & white, General, Humour / fun, Photo journalism, Portraits / people
VS Mode Rating 98 (30% won)
These stats show the percentage of wins and the rating score that your photo has achieved. You can go to the VS Mode by clicking on this icon.

Signup to e2

Signup to e2 to see which photo this has won or lost against in the vs mode
Votes:Voting Disabled
Critque wantedCritique Wanted
Has Modifications Modifications Welcome (Upload a Modification)
Awards have been disabled on this photo

Comments

This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.
banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10986 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2983 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jul 2014 - 7:30 PM

I was thinking that perhaps dividing it into two images would work best. Then I saw Jokens mod, and that makes a lot of sense to me. Its all about cameras.



regards


Willie

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

Mollycat
Mollycat e2 Member 1Mollycat vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jul 2014 - 8:18 PM

Walkyawn. Sounds like a new Japanese sushi dish.

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

dark_lord
dark_lord Critique Team 101505 forum postsdark_lord vcard England145 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jul 2014 - 8:31 PM

Interesting characters here, but there is too much going on, no single strong point. Normally a group of people with different expressions would be good, but there is a gap between them and no interaction (why should there be, but equally this doesn't suggest crowd). Clipping the guy on the right looks careless and he has a great expression which does draw the eye. More space to the right would certainly help.
Essentially this is really two different groups each worthy of their own image.
Mod uploaded.

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

youmightlikethis
youmightlikethis e2 Member 121312 forum postsyoumightlikethis vcard Scotland
25 Jul 2014 - 8:35 PM

thanks for crits and comments

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 8527 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1091 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jul 2014 - 9:21 PM

Street photography freezes a moment in time with all its unsatisfactory untidiness, all its unanswered questions. Sometimes it requires an objective outsider to identify the real story. Joken's Mod does that. The yawn looks important to the image, but it's a distraction - the real strength and structure emerge when it disappears.
Moira

Last Modified By mrswoolybill at 25 Jul 2014 - 9:21 PM

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

paulbroad
paulbroad  789 forum posts United Kingdom880 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jul 2014 - 5:03 PM

Good quality but just too much going on. Every figure is doing something different and is sharp enough to demand attention. Even the most dominent figure is not strong enough to fully command the scene. She needs to be rather larger and stronger in the frame.

Paul

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

- Original Poster Comments
- Your Posts

Add a Comment

You must be a member to leave a comment

Username:
Password:
Remember me:
Un-tick this box if you want to login each time you visit.