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trying to convey lonely feeling serenity solitude which of the three do this if any

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 60D
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:24 Nov 2013 - 12:18 PM
Focal Length:24mm
Aperture:f/4.0
Shutter Speed:1/2000sec
Exposure Comp:-1/3
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Manual
Title:THREE SHOTS AT SOLITUDE
Username:youmightlikethis youmightlikethis
Uploaded:27 Nov 2013 - 8:14 PM
Tags:Balloch 2, General, Landscape / travel
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Mollycat
Mollycat e2 Member 1Mollycat vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
27 Nov 2013 - 9:09 PM

Three good images. Would the bench on its own work any better, with the ships reflection to the right. Might gives more of an impression of loneless rather than solitude. You would know best. Peter.

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mrswoolybill Critique Team 7413 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1001 Constructive Critique Points
27 Nov 2013 - 10:25 PM

V1 is intriguing. There are three different areas, different worlds, all deliberately ignoring each other. The groynes, the bench, the ship.

I'm imagining just two - the bench and the ship. Ostentatiously avoiding direct eye contact. More oblique, less informative...

I do like the total lack of horizon, water melts into sky. That's important.

There's a dark blob in the sky, probably a bird but it's really annoying me, it has to go.

Mod to follow...
Moira

Last Modified By mrswoolybill at 27 Nov 2013 - 10:26 PM

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youmightlikethis e2 Member 121011 forum postsyoumightlikethis vcard Scotland
28 Nov 2013 - 4:00 AM

thanks for crits comments and mod

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