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grab shot just of the mile in Edinburgh so how can it be improved [a brief return to the crit gallery before anyone notices]

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 60D
Lens:60.0 mm (35 mm equivalent: 94.0 mm)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:24 May 2014 - 11:42 AM
Focal Length:60mm
Aperture:f/3.2
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:125
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Evaluative
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Cloudy
Title:whats wrong with this photograph
Username:youmightlikethis youmightlikethis
Uploaded:28 May 2014 - 6:44 PM
Tags:General, Humour / fun, Photo journalism, Portraits / people
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10868 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2867 Constructive Critique Points
28 May 2014 - 7:07 PM

Its a nice shot Ian, nothing really wrong with this.


When I download it and look at it in PS, it suggest a little more brightness on the ladies, - just a little; it seems that window frame influenced exposure a tough.

Uploaded a mod with this done, and a small increase in contrast.

Good work.


Willie

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dark_lord
dark_lord Critique Team 101475 forum postsdark_lord vcard England130 Constructive Critique Points
28 May 2014 - 7:36 PM

Well Ian, essentially nothing, there's a connection between the two and the conversation is clearly animated, which you've caught well.

You uploaded this as part of a series very recently and it was one of the images I quite liked.
A good subject for mono, but in this case I have no preference.

While the reflection in the window does give some scene setting information, the image itself just concentrating on the two women is stronger. It's the human interaction that interests the viewer, location is somewhat secondary.

Keith

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Mollycat
Mollycat e2 Member 1Mollycat vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
28 May 2014 - 8:10 PM

Your at it again.

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youmightlikethis
youmightlikethis e2 Member 121015 forum postsyoumightlikethis vcard Scotland
29 May 2014 - 4:11 AM

thanks for crits

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