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Another portrait from the wedding last year, this is the twin to the other little girl. She was the shy one and I have cropped the image leaving some of the pillars and the wall to try to bring accross her character.

This will be my last upload for a few days, I will catch up on Sunday.

Thanks for looking
Ann

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 5D MkII
Lens:EF24-105mm F/4L IS USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:7 Aug 2011 - 4:30 PM
Focal Length:96mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/200sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Title:Behind the lines
Username:Oliverpants Oliverpants
Uploaded:14 Mar 2012 - 8:48 AM
Tags:Girl, Portraits / people
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AnnChown
AnnChown e2 Member 4183 forum postsAnnChown vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
14 Mar 2012 - 8:49 AM

A beautiful portrait. Love the composition.
Ann

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Lillian
Lillian e2 Member 5Lillian vcard United Kingdom16 Constructive Critique Points
14 Mar 2012 - 9:13 AM

Beautifully captured Ann, with those blue eyes perfectly captured
Great portrait shot and cropping in
Lillian

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gary_d
gary_d e2 Member 6520 forum postsgary_d vcard Wales12 Constructive Critique Points
14 Mar 2012 - 9:25 AM

Works for me.

gary

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franken
franken e2 Member 113096 forum postsfranken vcard Wales4 Constructive Critique Points
14 Mar 2012 - 9:48 AM

A really beautiful portrait.

Ken

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digital_boi
14 Mar 2012 - 9:57 AM

her eyes have been captured so well and set off the whole image nice one

GrahamGrinGrinGrin

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taggart
taggart e2 Member 1042 forum poststaggart vcard United States12 Constructive Critique Points
14 Mar 2012 - 12:06 PM

They will grow up to be a pretty pair-- She does look shy!

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andylea
andylea  537 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
14 Mar 2012 - 5:52 PM

a beautiful portrait ann top shot Wink
andy

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morpheus1955
morpheus1955 e2 Member 7morpheus1955 vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
14 Mar 2012 - 6:42 PM

Beautiful portrait, beautifully captured.

Hugh

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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England209 Constructive Critique Points
14 Mar 2012 - 8:08 PM

Like the eyes and hint of a smile in this Ann.
A couple of points for me the bright white line on the LHS need to be cropped way as it drawing the eye, your could even make it almost square be cropping the window on the rhs out too but not really necessary.
The second is the skin smoothing with is a little too plastic especially for a young girl. More noticeable when you go large
Regards Richard

Last Modified By Richsr at 14 Mar 2012 - 8:09 PM

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Alvar
Alvar  7 France2 Constructive Critique Points
14 Mar 2012 - 9:08 PM

A lovely portrait Ann
Alvar

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Anjantoo
Anjantoo  6 England1 Constructive Critique Points
14 Mar 2012 - 10:27 PM

Beautiful portrait, she has amazing eyes.
Jann
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EMJAYCEE
EMJAYCEE e2 Member 5EMJAYCEE vcard England10 Constructive Critique Points
15 Mar 2012 - 4:43 PM

A lovely girl - you have captured her beautifully.
Joan.

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OAKEY
OAKEY  6 United Kingdom
15 Mar 2012 - 8:37 PM

A beautiful little girl Ann and very nicely captured.
Shaun

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10819 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2820 Constructive Critique Points
15 Mar 2012 - 9:45 PM

I really love the idea, the pose and the expression.

I do agree with Richard that theres a little too much softening. I also think the skin colour is extremely red, and the face can be exposed a little more. I would suggest cropping from the left, and a little on the right.


Ive loaded 2 mods, - both cropped, and with the skin tone and exposure adjusted. Mod2 also has a little diffuse glow applied. Brightening the face has the effect of reducing the appearance of over smoothing.


regards



Willie

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Glostopcat
Glostopcat e2 Member 8232 forum postsGlostopcat vcard England2 Constructive Critique Points
16 Mar 2012 - 10:20 PM

A charming and natural portrait of this lovely little girl, delighted to make this one a RC

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raygregson
raygregson e2 Member 6raygregson vcard United Kingdom
18 Mar 2012 - 12:29 PM

beautiful portrait ann,well taken.ray

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sparrowhawk
sparrowhawk e2 Member 5267 forum postssparrowhawk vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
18 Mar 2012 - 2:37 PM

a gem

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lesliea
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25 Mar 2012 - 2:51 AM

Beautiful image Ann well captured,
Allen, Smile

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Maiwand
Maiwand e2 Member 7Maiwand vcard England69 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2012 - 7:06 PM

Delightful portrait.
Ron

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dmhuynh72
dmhuynh72 e2 Member 628 forum postsdmhuynh72 vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
11 Apr 2012 - 10:14 PM

That is a beautiful portrait Ann. Hope you're well.
regards
Yung

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dawnmichelle
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4 Jun 2012 - 3:50 AM

beautiful

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