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Thanks to advice from Niknut... I've cropped this photo of my daughter and think it looks better. Any comments/thoughts very much appreciated.

Dilys

Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony Alpha SLT-A55V
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:25 Sep 2011 - 5:27 PM
Focal Length:210mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.6
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/250sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:1600
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Beth Version 2
Username:DilysT DilysT
Uploaded:12 Oct 2011 - 6:14 PM
Tags:Autumn, Portraits / people, Red hair, Redhead
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WhiteRose1
WhiteRose1 e2 Member 41116 forum postsWhiteRose1 vcard England137 Constructive Critique Points
12 Oct 2011 - 7:26 PM

She still looks good, and the composition is indeed stronger. Lovely image.

Dave

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Niknut
Niknut e2 Member 4734 forum postsNiknut vcard United Kingdom64 Constructive Critique Points
12 Oct 2011 - 8:02 PM

12/10 !!!!!.....told you so !Grin

Your daughter's now looking 'into' the frame !, & the whole image is now much more balanced.....with everything eliminated that doesn't
contribute anything.......really lovely shot !!!!!

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chase
chase Critique Team 91118 forum postschase vcard England242 Constructive Critique Points
12 Oct 2011 - 8:35 PM

She is very beautiful,I so love her hair.
Nicely reworked,a great result,nice soft look,wish I had taken this.

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RickFreid
RickFreid  4 United States
12 Oct 2011 - 9:51 PM

Beautiful portrait!

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CaroleS
CaroleS e2 Member 437 forum postsCaroleS vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
13 Oct 2011 - 10:14 AM

This is such a beautiful portrait. Carole

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Peagreen
Peagreen  4 England1 Constructive Critique Points
13 Oct 2011 - 9:12 PM

A beautiful portrait of a beautiful young lady. Smile
Take care, Pauline

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Mike_Young
Mike_Young e2 Member 8Mike_Young vcard United Kingdom7 Constructive Critique Points
16 Oct 2011 - 12:53 PM

Cracking shot of a lovely young lady

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ianrobinson
ianrobinson e2 Member 51181 forum postsianrobinson vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
17 Oct 2011 - 11:35 PM

A beautiful portrait and a perfect Autumn one at that.

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mikesavage
mikesavage  12260 forum posts England2 Constructive Critique Points
18 Oct 2011 - 7:18 PM

Now I think this is a better shot than the one I commented on yesterday - full marks! Click!

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SheppardPhotography

Terrific. Beautiful light and use of colour.

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DilysT
DilysT e2 Member 3DilysT vcard United Kingdom
21 Oct 2011 - 4:39 PM

Thank you all so much for the encouraging comments!

Dilys Smile

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