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waiting

By PatrickMiguel  
waiting for the limo

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BobFancy 7 11 4 United Kingdom
28 Jan 2010 8:00AM
Elegant shot with great tone.

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johnnyboy114 8 231 106 United Kingdom
28 Jan 2010 8:03AM
Beautiful and really different type of location for this kind of shot...makes it really stand out...lovely shot
Costapix 7 2 Spain
28 Jan 2010 9:07AM
gr8 capture ... relly nice tones
paulbroad 9 117 1077 United Kingdom
28 Jan 2010 1:59PM
A very nice image in all respects except he name on the front - why put that there. Even in grey it pulls my eyes from the main image.

Paul
banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3558 Canada
28 Jan 2010 10:26PM
A beautiful shot Patrick, lovely monotone with a wide range of tones.

I would only suggest [perhaps a less central composition for the lady, and have loaded a mod with this change using cropping and a quick canvas extension and clone. I have lifted the shadows just slightly, especially on her face and dress, with a final sharpening. Remember to sharpen after you re size for the web, - as you will lose sharpness due to compression.


Hope this is helpful


Regards


Willie
cats_123 Plus
12 4.6k 27 Northern Ireland
29 Jan 2010 12:24PM
nicely composed but feels a little dark to me.
Shroomer 9 14 167 England
29 Jan 2010 6:15PM
Love the tones and innocense here. The one part that draws my eye is the half chair bottom right. Would have removed it it just throws the balance out and clutters
Congrats on the EC
Richard
QuinnyA 7 59 Australia
3 Feb 2010 10:38PM
A really nice image and moment captured - Personally I would have at least cropped off the top small windows as the verandah roof outside tends to close down the space she is in - take that a way and she seems to be looking in to a lot more endless space and for me this would add to the tention of the moment. I would play quite a bit with the crop to reduce clutter - the sharpen on resize mentioned is a good tip as it certainly has got a little soft. - Cheers Andy
paulcr 12 1.5k 9 Ireland
3 Feb 2010 10:41PM
Personally I wouldn't change a thing. I think from crop to tonal range its a beauty. Paul
Jonahh 7 United Kingdom
10 Feb 2010 9:48PM
Great catch. The image has a very peaceful atmosphere and I'm actually wondering what she's waiting for Wink

I took the liberty to upload a - not at all perfect - modification, with a slightly different crop and tone as I think her half-visible reflection in the ground is worth emphasizing. Also I think she looks more waiting and in more solitude when I take off a bit of room at the top and the bit of the chair bottom right. I think this way she's 'free to go' and gets a bit of lightness and a stronger contemplation.

I think the lady, seeing this image, will remember this moment for ever...

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