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uganda 9 27 United Kingdom
6 May 2013 11:11AM

Any thoughts/comments would be appreciated...

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scottishphototours 13 2.6k 2
6 May 2013 12:10PM
- fix the spelling mistake (Sciences) on the Bio page and rewrite it - the grammar is very poor.
- Remove the obvious Edinburgh views and festival type pics and the Royals pics too - neither seem relevant to me.
- The pic of Salmond is terrible, I'd take that out too.
- The UK section is particularly strong - good content (with changes above)

Also - use capital letters on India and Uganda too??
uganda 9 27 United Kingdom
6 May 2013 12:43PM
Thanks - the capital letters change according to which page you're on.

But I'll make the changes now - they should be visible in a few minutes....
scottishphototours 13 2.6k 2
6 May 2013 1:40PM
How about this grammar?...

Primarily pursuing documentary portrait photography with a view to covering social issues, my photography will enable business, media and NGO’s to develop articles, reports and any other publications which will require images for the purposes of public relations, social responsibility and advertising.

And then...

Timothy Aikman is from Edinburgh, was educated at the Edinburgh Academy and graduated from Stevenson College in 2003 with a Licentiateship of the British Institute of Professional Photography. He has since graduated from the Open University with a BA Hons. which incorporates his photography and interest in Social Sciences and International Studies.

Predominantly interested in the third world and its peoples, Timothy has combined his work as a documentary photographer with that of an international aid worker. Some of the issues that affect him, and that are reflected in his work, are poverty and AIDS in Africa. Timothy’s work focuses on how individuals cope with such problems and his subjects are active participants in his portraits.

Based in Edinburgh, Timothy is available for editorial and documentary work.

Subtle but possibly better!

Also, what's on page 4?? - comes up blank for me.
peterjones 15 4.6k 1 United Kingdom
6 May 2013 1:48PM
I would also suggest a good dictionary and Roger's Thesaurus ..........Wink

uganda 9 27 United Kingdom
6 May 2013 2:03PM
Thanks - I was just looking at the writing...

Please ignore page four for the time being - I may just delete that page, or use it for "current and/or future work".

But, first things first - I'll try to get the current pages remedied first!
uganda 9 27 United Kingdom
6 May 2013 3:19PM
Current incarnation of possible website is available at the above link....
scottishphototours 13 2.6k 2
6 May 2013 6:28PM
Looks good to me...you're hired!
ade_mcfade 13 15.2k 216 England
6 May 2013 6:32PM
brighter menu items... can't read dark grey against black
FrogTastic 7 52 United Kingdom
15 Jul 2013 10:17AM
Seems to be a lot of open space at the bottom
Simon_Marlow 13 560 United Kingdom
15 Jul 2013 1:30PM
Sorry, but when viewing the UK portfolio shots, you could be forgiven for thinking you're on a 'Do you recognise this person' from the riots website.

I would try to diversify the subjects a bit.
15 Jul 2013 4:20PM
Projects - Explore by light - Uganda ".....audience to relate....." not too relate

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