Views: 64 (20 Unique)    

Looking Out

By Umberto_V
Taken at the Five Sisters Zoo near Edinburgh.

Take your photography to the next level and beyond...

  • NEWS

Why not join for free today?

Join for Free

Your total photography experience starts here


Paintman Plus
11 1.2k 177 United Kingdom
12 Feb 2012 8:16PM
+ I like the ears pointing at the same angle.
+ I like the donkey's expression.
+ I like the light which shows up the textures of the donkey's coat.

- I don't like the way the second donkey is hidden behind the first one. Its feet appear out of the first's stomach and the face of the donkey is obscured too much. Taking the shot from the other side would be better compositionally imo.
- I don't like the flat contrast. It needs selective contrast applied and a definite white and black.
-I don't like the blurred bit at the bottom edge of the photo.

Join ePHOTOzine for free and remove these adverts.

ade_mcfade 14 15.2k 216 England
14 Feb 2012 12:47PM
mirroring of the donkeys
both have alert ears
space to right for them to look into

not keen on the crop on the donkeys - get the whole thing in shot, or just the important head parts...
fence position - it's going through the poor thing's head...
strange blurring around the donkey's knees, like you've cloned something and left evidence
14 Feb 2012 2:11PM
You are correct. I did clone out a post that was there. Didn't make a great job of it Smile Didn't spot the stray bit of fence. In hindsight a closer shot would have been better. Would have solved the problem of the post and the feet.

Sign In

You must be a member to leave a comment.

ePHOTOzine, the web's friendliest photography community.

Join For Free

Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more.