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Take Me Away

By devlin
A Mono of an existing image in my PF....

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Bloggs 6 313 England
20 Mar 2012 7:01PM
clever shot inventive
works well as a mono
did well with little or no reflections in the glass

It's either a very tight crop or the angle was tight
would have prefered the door not to be there , she would look great without the door !! lol
i like this shot , not alot wrong with it for me. well done Smile

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Philo 7 99 83 England
21 Mar 2012 6:57AM
It breaks the rules and works very well for it
Love the lighting and comp
Excellent mono

Could clone out the "Pull" sign as it is distracting
Something encroaching in the lhs about a third from the bottom
Some specks (dust bunnies?) in the clouds

Negatives all very minor really, super shot Prabh.
chensuriashi Plus
11 275 17 England
21 Mar 2012 7:08AM
I like this one in B+W
Enjoy the idea and the theme
The dreamy expression and the clouds

I also feel that this one is a bit of a tight crop
Some brickwork around the window frame could have added to the "Prisoner" theme
That semi circle half way up on the left could have been cloned out (just to be #3) Grin
2 Aug 2012 5:05PM
+ liked the idea
+ the lights are too good
+ beautiful make up and dreamy expressions Smile

- i would have cropped out RHS frame, It disturbs balance
- i would have cropped entire bottom section starting just above 'pull ' sign, that would make composition cleaner & non distracting
- there is one awkward wrinkle formed on models throat area just below the chin, its avoidable in such shots when all other things are taken care so beautifully.

i find no issues with tight crop ! am suggesting even tighter crop .. that takes viewer even closer to the object Wink

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