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Alevel Work

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This is one of my many a level photography photographs- my coursework topic is movement

Camera:Nikon D2X Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18.0-70.0 mm f/3.5-4.5
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:14 Jan 2014 - 3:34 PM
Focal Length:18mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Shutter Speed:1/800sec
Exposure Comp:+4
Exposure Mode:Shutter speed priority AE
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:No Flash
White Balance:Auto
Title:Alevel Work
Username:AliceLuisePhotography AliceLuisePhotography
Uploaded:16 Jan 2014 - 11:51 AM
Tags:A level, Black & white, Course, Digitally manipulated, Movement, People, Portraits / people, Specialist / abstract, Sports / action
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mrswoolybill Critique Team 9827 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1314 Constructive Critique Points
16 Jan 2014 - 2:54 PM

Very nicely balanced in various ways!

I like the sense of progression from one stance to the next. Could I suggest that it would work better against a plainer background? There's an awful lot of clutter in that garden, and the light tarpaulin (I think) really distracts the eye away from the foreground. I would want to get rid of the apple on the grass, and the twig top right, at the very least.

A bit of diffused flash could also make the figures stand out better.

And I hope that your exploration of movement is including slower shutter speeds.

Just suggestions, I hope you won't be offended.

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