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By lillypix  
Thanks so much for all the comments on yesterday's effort.

This is another attempt at the same photo, taking into account everyone's great advice from yesterday's.

Subjects closer together, a darker but still brown background, opaque watermark, tighter crop.

More advice for more improvements will always be welcome, so all comments gratefully received!

Thanks,
Lianna

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Voters: ringyneck, franken, Pete and 37 more

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franken Plus
15 4.5k 4 United Kingdom
7 Feb 2012 11:36AM
Lovely still -life.

Ken

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Jestertheclown 9 7.6k 252 England
7 Feb 2012 11:45AM
That's better!

Sorry Lianna, I followed yesterday's version but as I know precious little about this kind of shots, I read all and said nothing!
7 Feb 2012 11:50AM
Beautifully executed!
7 Feb 2012 12:52PM
great capture fine detail and natural colours lighting spot on

Graham
luceombra 6 27 5 Italy
7 Feb 2012 2:12PM
This is marvelous. I see that you have accepted my suggestion concerning the opacity of the signature Wink Now is much better Smile
Al
Briwooly 12 452 5 England
7 Feb 2012 2:24PM
Real nice work Lianna great still life

Brian..........................
Niknut Plus
7 1.7k 76 United Kingdom
7 Feb 2012 5:10PM
Beautiful shot !!!.....much more 'feeling' gone into this shot, with a lovely 'aura' !!, & quite an
improvement over the previous version.......top notch stuff !!!!!!!!
lillypix 7 60 4 United Kingdom
8 Feb 2012 7:29AM
Wow! I hadn't expected such attention for this! Thanks for all the positive comments and votes. It's my first RC photo Smile

It's proven the power of the critique gallery - so helpful!

Thanks,
Lianna

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