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pablophotographer 9 1.9k 405
11 Jul 2017 11:47PM
Amigo, the difference between lemones and melones is hard to distinguish. They are both yellow and similarly shaped. But one is bitter and the other one is sweet.
This to me is very vague and dispersed to all directions despite being pressed to be unified under the black and white veneer. Not even the tres couples, the nuns, the passersby and the dos facas in the posters make it work. But it has potential.
You can split the image in two. The part on the right contains the two nuns, the staircase of the background and the architectural beauty of the building entrance and the pavement. No one else.
As the nuns are dressed in black and in white they not only look suitable for the black and white frame, but they look as two queens of a chess game so they can give this lemon a taste of melon: "which tiles did the God say I am supposed to hop on?"

Now, zoom out a bit and include into frame the passerby who walks to the right in front of the nuns. Can you hear them saying: "Agh-agh" disapprovingly?

That is sweet as melon
pablophotographer
12 Jul 2017 6:38PM

Quote:Amigo, the difference between lemones and melones is hard to distinguish. They are both yellow and similarly shaped. But one is bitter and the other one is sweet.
This to me is very vague and dispersed to all directions despite being pressed to be unified under the black and white veneer. Not even the tres couples, the nuns, the passersby and the dos facas in the posters make it work. But it has potential.
You can split the image in two. The part on the right contains the two nuns, the staircase of the background and the architectural beauty of the building entrance and the pavement. No one else.
As the nuns are dressed in black and in white they not only look suitable for the black and white frame, but they look as two queens of a chess game so they can give this lemon a taste of melon: "which tiles did the God say I am supposed to hop on?"

Now, zoom out a bit and include into frame the passerby who walks to the right in front of the nuns. Can you hear them saying: "Agh-agh" disapprovingly?

That is sweet as melon
pablophotographer



Thanks a million pablophotographer for going through the trouble of writing such a detail comment, very much appreciated, it all helps me to learn......which is a never ending process...everyday is a school day. Thanks once more.

TC
pablophotographer 9 1.9k 405
14 Jul 2017 12:15AM
You are welcome. Some of us are keen to help fellow photographers, knowledge is good to share Smile
pablophotographer

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