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9: before the guests

By rosie42  
before the guests arrive
I straighten
the already straight cushions


This series of images is inspired by Haiku - the tiny poems of Japan, traditionally written in seventeen syllables.

Haiku usually gain their effect by suggestion, presenting a clear-cut picture which serves as a starting point for trains of thought and emotion. But because these poems are short, they rarely try to give the picture in detail - the rest the reader must fill in.

In recent years, there has been an enthusiastic and expanding interest in Haiku-in-English. This genre springs from the Japanese form but rarely consists of seventeen syllables. What it does seek to retain is the brevity, clarity, immediacy and resonance of Japanese Haiku and, like a photographic image, to record and share a moment of seeing...

01: strangers
02: curl
03: been there
04: dissatisfied
05: the silence of books
06: one farmer and me
07: the last embrace
08: shallows
10: retreats to the sea
11: a moment of stillness
12: in between
13: suspended

Thank you for viewing - all feedback (+/-) gratefully received...

Susie :o)

Tags: General Haiku

Voters: TyChee, paulstefan, PeterBee and 14 more

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PeterBee 14 35 5 United Kingdom
4 Jul 2008 2:54PM
Love the symetry of the pattern created by the cushions.

motoads 13 14 Australia
13 Jul 2008 8:17AM
hi there Susie!

well, just catching up on your latest couple of uploads...

the luminescence(?) in this is fantastic! the light bounces all around the frame and the colorful patterns from the cushions are a feast for the eyes...

i think the simple composition works really well against the complex display of color.

first class! ads :o)

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