Back Modifications (1)
Views: 38 (23 Unique)  Award Shortlist   

A Bee

By JackieB    
Bees are tricky things, never look at the camera when you want them to. Anyway this is the best of the bunch, taken using my kit lens on AE which was set at f8 and a single focal point.

Tags: Flowers and plants Close-up and macro Wildlife and nature

Take your photography to the next level and beyond...

  • NEWS

Why not join for free today?

Join for Free

Your total photography experience starts here

PortraitPro 17 with Background Editing Out Now! EXTRA 10% OFF code EPZRS17
This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.


Join ePHOTOzine for free and remove these adverts.

JackieB 7 18 3 United Kingdom
11 Aug 2010 9:09AM
I sharpened it slightly and enhanced the yellow of its body.
pamelajean Plus
11 1.0k 1962 United Kingdom
11 Aug 2010 8:28PM
I think you have done well here, and have also placed the bee nicely within the frame. As you say, they tend to bury their heads, and it would have been nice to see it, as well as a bit more of the wings, but there are lots about at the moment so you have ample opportunities.
Jestertheclown 9 7.6k 252 England
12 Aug 2010 12:11AM
I'm not sure I can really improve upon what you've already achieved here.
As Pamelajean has said, compositionally, it's about as god as it could be and there's nothing wrong with the colours.
All I've done in my mod. is to run it through Noiseware set to "Portrait" which removes the noise and reduces sharpness by 2% so I've probably undone what you weer trying to achieve in the first place!
I also tinkered in CS5 with levels and shadows/highlights but to be honest, it made no difference and certainly didn't improve anything.
You've done wel.

JackieB 7 18 3 United Kingdom
12 Aug 2010 8:32AM
Thankyou for your comments. I feel that I might be doing something right sometimes as you couldn't improve it much Bren. I will keep practising though. Thankyou all again
paulbroad 10 123 1195 United Kingdom
12 Aug 2010 2:44PM
The problem with Bumble bees is getting a good position. this is too much body and virtually no head or face. For this insect, you need the front end as your main subject - often the case with others, but not always.

You need to get in position, then wait as it forages for a better 'pose'. Not easy.


Sign In

You must be a member to leave a comment.

ePHOTOzine, the web's friendliest photography community.

Join For Free

Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more.