Back Versions (3)
Modifications (2)
Views: 50 (25 Unique) 
Vote 14
Award Shortlist   

A Man and His Music

By Lynniesefforts  
My good mate Ron, sitting on his front porch, off in his own world, and his brand new guitar, complete with swing tags Tongue He doesn't want to take them off GrinGrin

Tags: Portrait Music Australia Guitar Portraits and people

Voters: ugly, morpheus1955, cjl47 and 11 more

Take your photography to the next level and beyond...

  • NEWS

Why not join for free today?

Join for Free

Your total photography experience starts here


cjl47 10 4 3 England
5 Aug 2013 1:03PM
Good set of mono images.

Join ePHOTOzine for free and remove these adverts.

Hermanus 5 4 South Africa
5 Aug 2013 1:15PM
These are special images Lynnie !! Very well taken !
ColleenA Plus
5 362 6 Australia
5 Aug 2013 1:29PM
Great set of images...he does look in his element...think I like the crop in V4 the best.....great captures
boov 5 2 United Kingdom
5 Aug 2013 1:56PM
Super set
mrswoolybill Plus
11 1.2k 1929 United Kingdom
5 Aug 2013 4:10PM
Very attractive set. V1 works best for me, you have the triangle of the face and two hands, with hand/eye coordination that directs the route for the viewer's eye to follow. Face to his left hand, then down to right hand, then back to face. It's quite important that you've included the top of the guitar, without that it would look cramped, unnatural. Cutting off the lower curve of the guitar is fine, it gives a flat baseline for the composition.
Ron may not want to take the sold sign off but I do, both tags are a real distraction and spoil the harmony and rhythm. As a musician he should understand that! So a Mod will follow. Assuming that your software includes the Clone tool it's a very straightforward adjustment, just follow the lines of the background.
You've used a fast shutter speed to freeze the action. Next time you get a chance to photograph him can I suggest that you experiment with slower shutter speeds - depending on how steady your hands are, as that's quite a heavy lens, try 1/100 second, holding very steadily. If that fails, 1/125 and get him to play something fast! The aim is to get him sharp except for a little motion blur in the right hand. That conveys concentration plus action.
V2 is good, it gives an important element of the action. V4 works better than V3 because he's looking down at the guitar and we can see a reasonable amount of the instrument - though I'd like to see a bit more. In V3 he's looking at his left hand and we can only see a bit of finger.
Musicians are a wonderfully engaging, attractive subject. I hope you get the chance to try again.
NDODS 7 5.1k 125 United Kingdom
5 Aug 2013 6:44PM
An interesting and very well observed set of images
summed up so very eloquently by Moira

Regards Nathan GrinGrinGrin
Thank you Moira for your helpful, and much appreciated, advice and tips there... I like what you said re the shutter speeds will try that next time, and thanks again , very much , for taking the time ....

At this stage I cant clone anything as dont have the correct software.. but one day !!

unfortunately Ron loves his tags..he's like that...GrinGrin

Lynette GrinGrin
PS I just saw the mods, thanks heaps Moira, wonderful improvement GrinGrin

Lynette GrinGrin

Sign In

You must be a member to leave a comment.

ePHOTOzine, the web's friendliest photography community.

Join For Free

Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more.