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A Storm Brewing

By DarylH    
Another from a sunset that turned stormy.

Tags: Landscape and travel Night and low light

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.

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26 Jul 2010 4:52PM
Great shot love the clouds and the reflection on the sand.
Simon

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26 Jul 2010 5:01PM
great shot
banehawi Plus
11 1.3k 3401 Canada
26 Jul 2010 5:17PM
A nice scene Daryl. Storms can provide terrific clouds and skies, and that luminous light is very nice.

As there is so much of interest in the sky, the shot can look better if theres less foreground and more sky. Theres not a lot going on at the bottom beyond that light, and if cropped here it provides a lead in to the scene.

Ive cropped in the mod, and closed in a little more sky just to place the horizon on a third. Increased contrast and applied a warming filter to add to the drama.


Nice work,


Hope this is helpful,


Regards


Willie
paulbroad 8 110 1011 United Kingdom
26 Jul 2010 8:52PM
Like this, but the mod is even better, but without the contrast increase. Clouds have gone too dark. Do the crop, keeping the tones as they are.

Paul
Jestertheclown 7 7.2k 249 England
26 Jul 2010 9:33PM
I rather think you're both right so I've attempted the middle road!

Please see my mod.

Jester.
pamelajean Plus
10 951 1803 United Kingdom
27 Jul 2010 4:52PM
Dare I say I like it just as it is? In fact, I think it's the best image in your portfolio so far.
Pamela.

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