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A study in Yellow

By StevenBest  
Hello thank you for looking at my photo a study in Yellow

If you have left a comment or voted I thank you

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Steven

Tags: General Architecture Yellow Specialist and abstract

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.

Comments


6 Jan 2012 4:39AM
A Great angle of view.

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Well taken, great shot..

Samar.
nonur Plus
7 15 9 Turkey
6 Jan 2012 6:40AM
Lovely study, well done!
Chinga Plus
5 1 1 United Kingdom
6 Jan 2012 6:59AM
This makes a beautiful abstract! Good work! IB
saltireblue Plus
5 5.4k 31 Norway
6 Jan 2012 7:21AM
MArvellous pov on this abstract. Like it lots.

Malc
Dear Team.

I really thank you all for the comments about my photo I really do value your feedback as I want to learn. Thank you as well for looking at my folio

again just wanted to thank you

Regards

Steven
alansnap Plus
12 570 25 United Kingdom
6 Jan 2012 8:23AM
HI Steven, I really like architectural shots like this which challenge the viewer. I'd like to see another version where you've stepped to the left a little or you crop the right, because at the moment the strong curved vertical cuts the image in two so the top right is somewhat disconnected. Another angle might not work, but I think it's worth the try.
Alan
Niknut Plus
5 1.1k 68 United Kingdom
6 Jan 2012 4:32PM
Fascinating shot !!!....love those repeating curves....top notch stuff !!
paulbroad 8 108 987 United Kingdom
6 Jan 2012 8:00PM
Very nice indeed. I might consider cropping off the highlights at the bottom - by far the brightest parts of the image and right on the edge.

paul
Hello I have just uploaded a different version of the photo and taking in some comments made see what you think also the photos were taken on a very old digital camera.

Regards

Steven
paulbroad 8 108 987 United Kingdom
7 Jan 2012 8:54AM
For me, that small crop is a great improvement to an already good image. It is the curves that make this and was extremely well spotted, and simple is often best.

It is usually not a good idea to have highlights, particularly the only highlights, on the edge of the frame. This shows that fact.

Paul
Niknut Plus
5 1.1k 68 United Kingdom
7 Jan 2012 3:17PM
I'll stick with V1 !!............

V2 has become a pure 'pattern' picture, still OK with nice curves & colour, but it's lost the 'zing' that exists in V1 ?????

Different strokes for different blokes, I think the expression is ??
taggart Plus
11 46 12 United States
7 Jan 2012 10:06PM
I so wanted this to be a a hosta-- The cropping has made it pure abstract!
Chinga Plus
5 1 1 United Kingdom
9 Jan 2012 5:46AM
It looks good from here.
But V1 was an amazing image anyway!
Good work. IB

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