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Adam in Eden

By cbridget  
This isn't completed yet, But I just wanted some feedback as I don't have anyone to bounce ideas off at the moment.
This is Adam for his period classical album 'Songs without words.'

Any help of feedback would be much appreciated!



Tags: Digitally manipulated Portraits and people

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Debs_Rocker 9 303 2 United Kingdom
12 Jan 2010 3:13PM
well I like it, maybe try picking out the odd item in a bit of colour and see what it looks like? It might look rubbish but who knows?

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BlueRoom Plus
12 73 20 United Kingdom
12 Jan 2010 4:16PM
Hi Bridget. I like the look of your cover and think the grapics work extremely well, but because that part of the image is so crisp and clean I feel the blur on the figure doesn't fit in. It's not a problem where you are indicating movement but the feet and right side should be better defined in my opinon. I don't know if you have drawn the graphics yourself but if you are it would be great if the figure started as a drawing at the bottom and merged into the photo as it went up. Just an idea.

cbridget 9 43 United Kingdom
12 Jan 2010 5:46PM
Thanks both of you, great points and ideas! I like the idea of him starting out as an illustration! thanks BlueRoom and Debs I will give it a go, cheers!
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