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Alannah 4

By franfoto
Continuing with my series of Alannah, this is a re-work of the first one I uploaded a few weeks back (Alannah 1). I readjusted the colour and texture, tilted the head and cropped closely to pinpoint the beautiful face and eyes of this lovely young model. I hope you like the result.
I am continually grateful for all the comments, critique and advice I have received from fellow members and I am using some of the information offered to improve on my portraiture work. It's good to know that there are many photographers on this site willing to help others and share their knowledge.
Many thanks to all for the lovely comments on all of my recent portraits and to those who have taken the time to upload modifications and suggestions.

Have a great weekend.
Fran xx

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Another beautiful portrait Fran !


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DerekL Plus
12 175 24 England
5 Dec 2009 2:29PM
Nice modification to the original Fran.
I has certainly improved the image a lot.
Like the closer crop and the angle of the face and the skin colour is much better.
Well done.

5 Dec 2009 3:32PM
Beautiful model, a lovely portrait. Sylvia
Steve_S Plus
11 180 3 United Kingdom
5 Dec 2009 3:42PM
This rework has definitely improved the original Fran, great work
Steve (or is it Paul Wink )
Bob_V 9 1 2 United States
5 Dec 2009 4:03PM
What a gorgeous portrait Fran, such fantastic work on this one.
taggart Plus
12 47 13 United States
5 Dec 2009 4:04PM
Beautiful eyes, so nicely showcased in this crop!
Love the hair detail as well!
pluckyfilly Plus
10 351 33 United Kingdom
5 Dec 2009 4:20PM
5 Dec 2009 4:32PM
Another Beautiful....Grand shot

Suehh 10 39 6 England
5 Dec 2009 4:58PM
Beautiful portrait
Mynett 8 142 6 United Kingdom
5 Dec 2009 5:03PM
wonderful work again fran this is 1st class

5 Dec 2009 5:08PM
And thanks for telling us what you did to get such a wonderful result
This is such a very special and beautiful portrait, I had to let you know. Thankyou for kind words of support.
teocali Plus
9 441 18 England
5 Dec 2009 5:51PM
I love what you have done with this Fran - the crop and angle really work so well and the skin tones and depth of detail in the eyes are superb. Beautiful hair colour and textures.
fentiger Plus
15 916 23 England
5 Dec 2009 6:19PM
Delightful and highly attractive portrait.

iancam 8 23 England
5 Dec 2009 6:52PM
Beautiful model and portrait Fran.
Roly 9 Wales
5 Dec 2009 7:57PM
Lovely portrait and model.Nice work Fran.
goso 10 2 1 Australia
5 Dec 2009 10:36PM
Beautiful, Fran...Bill
Maiwand Plus
10 3 72 England
5 Dec 2009 10:48PM
Superb light control Fran. That is a very pretty lady.
helenlinda Plus
9 344 22 United Kingdom
6 Dec 2009 9:31AM
Great processing Fran
bricurtis Plus
11 2.1k 49 England
6 Dec 2009 10:34AM
Looks a good result to me Fran. I like that you have filled the frame - such a lovely face - you have captured her skin texture well and I think her hair has a warmer tone than previous.
MickyMc 9 8 United Kingdom
6 Dec 2009 12:31PM
The detail is absolutely superb her skin texture is beautiful. Congratulations
brownsilent 10 7 2 United Kingdom
6 Dec 2009 4:56PM
Absolutely beautiful work Fran - excellent portrait!

Ps. I went back to the first image - definitely an improvement.
photophantom 9 108 3 Philippines
7 Dec 2009 11:20AM
7 Dec 2009 6:45PM
Just one word.
" Brilliant"
GalleryGirl 9 4 2 United Kingdom
7 Dec 2009 9:33PM
A beautiful model. Done a little mod. Smoothed her skin lighty.

Marilyn x
tigertimb 9 40 66 United Kingdom
8 Dec 2009 12:08AM
Beautiful shot Fran and a great improved over the original; but I particularly like the way the slight rotation has made her expression appear wistful
8 Dec 2009 2:54PM
A gorgeous looking model and photographed beautifully Fran, a big improvement on the original, all the tips and suggestions seem to be paying off nicely..........
Geoff xxx
Pegon 11 78 1 England
8 Dec 2009 11:33PM
A beautiful portrait Fran, she's gorgeous.
Thushari 7 1 Sri Lanka
9 Dec 2009 8:48AM
Beautiful portrait Fran. lovely model,
12 Dec 2009 11:06PM
Beautiful portrait of her...

thanks for letting us do mods just to see what we can come up with...
You do such fantastic work... it is just fun to see what I can come with ..

Hope your doing well... Smile
franfoto 9 2 32 England
13 Dec 2009 1:05AM
Thanks to John, Marilyn & Dawn for the mods, It's great to see what you all come up with. My thanks to all who have taken time to comment and vote, another, more sophisticated one of Alannah coming up very this space.
Glostopcat 11 255 2 England
20 Dec 2009 9:27PM
A first class portrait of this beautiful young lady Fran, many thanks for the user award on "Bleak Midwinter" it is much appreciated especially coming from such a talented photographer as your good self, Ed
Stenno 10 11 England
28 Sep 2010 10:25PM
Very nice, I really like this!

PhillipMinnis 7 94 4 Australia
5 May 2011 12:51AM
Another of your lovely portrait images! This one is just wonderful!



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