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Along the Esplanade

By justpat10
Evening view from the pier to the the esplanade in Torquay, Devon

Tags: Devon Pier Torquay Sea Serene Landscape and travel Still water Bright lights Night and low light

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Comments


26 Jun 2010 2:05PM
Good shot ~ well captured, nice colours and reflection.
Doc

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moiral 6 12 Scotland
26 Jun 2010 2:07PM
Lovely colours and reflections. Moira
26 Jun 2010 3:50PM
hey - I remember this view from when I used to sail this area as a kid. Brings back some memories!

Excellent capture. Very nice colours and reflections. The glow of the horizon and the added bonus - faint but clearly visible - of what I take is probably venus in the sky make it a very interesting image to look at.
pamelajean Plus
10 964 1830 United Kingdom
27 Jun 2010 6:16PM
Hello, Patrick. Love the colours in this, the graduated sky, and the reflections. I also quite like that bench, especially the ornate decoration. There is quite a dark area bottom left, but the eye is taken along the diagonal of the bench. So I am a bit torn here. The image would look great without it, but you obviously chose to include it. However, I think that I would have made more of a feature of the bench in a separate image, using more of it. In my first modification, I have simply desaturated the golden colour of the bench a little. In the second one, I went over it with the burn tool to darken it. In the third, I cropped to make it less prominent. Just a few options .
Pamela.
tmann 11 4 2 United States
28 Jun 2010 3:53PM
Hi Patrick
I will agree with Pamelajean that I like the bench in the foreground. The decor of it make it pleasant up from with a beautiful BG of color and light. The scene and lighting are incredible. I liked PJ modified versions but really like what you had first presented. The question you need to ask yourself is "what am I trying to convey to my viewer" I think you did that and it turned out great. This photo actually deserves much more positive attention in my book!
Nice work!
Thomas
paulbroad 9 116 1056 United Kingdom
29 Jun 2010 5:07PM
This is a very competent night shot - perfectly exposed, sharp and no flare. Excellent. Just a figure, bottom right, looking into the scene for perfection.

Paul

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