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At the station 2-waiting for the trains.

By xwang
Same place, same time...
Frist, thank you all for your kind and helpful comments on the previous station photo, and pointed out that the roof was burned. I didn't notice that, it was snow on the roof. I put a bit work on it on this one.Wink
I'm trying to learn a bit about colour, to see how it works on mono version. I have to say that I don't know anything about colour, I just messed about a bit on PS ended up with this one. The light part is slightly warmer than the shade part. Does it work? Should I bright it up a bit?
I'd like to have your knowledge, thoughts& ideas about colour in photography, anything, reallySmile, and all thoughts and criticisms are welcome about this photo. Thank you.
Jas.

Tags: Black and white Sun light Landscape and travel Pepole Railyway station

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Comments


17 Dec 2011 8:48AM
A brilliant shot! Marvelous light.
Regards, Oleg
Jasper87 Plus
10 2.5k 158 England
17 Dec 2011 9:24AM
The lighting is superb Jas, and a great composition.

Dave
RonnieAG Plus
10 154 119 Scotland
17 Dec 2011 9:28AM
A superb composition, Jasmine: love the way the line of the overhanging roof and the line of it's shadow and platform edge mirror the right hand roof tops and line of the track.
You could not have chosen a better viewpoint.
Ronnie.
SlowSong Plus
12 9.2k 30 England
17 Dec 2011 10:19AM
Very nicely done. I like the gradation in the sky and the dark sides hold the picture together. You've retained lovely detail in the station rafters and your composition is spot on. Very interesting content.
Chris
lonely_oryx 12 61 55 England
17 Dec 2011 10:27AM
Lovely lighting
cats_123 Plus
16 5.0k 30 Northern Ireland
17 Dec 2011 11:24AM
this works really well in mono...niec use of shadows Smile
barbarahirst 12 27 12 United Kingdom
17 Dec 2011 2:46PM
so full of atmosphere...
User_Removed 12 26 2 United States
17 Dec 2011 2:57PM
Great composition, Jasmine, with those different lines. It looks like you achieved a great duotone - I love that tiny hint of color. It adds so much interest.
Christina
thatmanbrian 9 342 3 Spain
17 Dec 2011 3:29PM
A great composition and lighting, but I'm in a minority - I don't like the toning! Be better without with those dark tones.
banehawi Plus
16 2.3k 4164 Canada
17 Dec 2011 4:16PM
I like it just as it is. It has quite a natural appearance, - so dont do anything else to it!



Regards


Willie
paulbroad 13 131 1289 United Kingdom
17 Dec 2011 4:44PM
Nice one, Jas. Full range of tones, great composition and spot on exposure. If I must comment, the roof, top right, is a touch bright with resulting tiny bit of flare. Pointing you at perfection!

paul
xwang 11 56 8
17 Dec 2011 6:00PM
Thank you very much Paul. Yes! You must comment, especially criticism,Grin I learned light from you, Winkstill learning..I tried to burn that part a bit. Obviously, not very sucessful. I'll give a try again...
Thank you Willie. Come on, I need your critique. That's what I'm here forSmile
Thank you Christina.
Thank you all for your kind comments and suport,
Jas.
pdcche 10 4 United Kingdom
17 Dec 2011 10:59PM
Nice composition Jas and great shadows again, have a good weekend too.. Peter
DanielD 10 1 United Kingdom
18 Dec 2011 1:38AM
Great waiting scene, Jasmine - Excellent lighting and comp.

Daniel
paulbroad 13 131 1289 United Kingdom
18 Dec 2011 9:10AM
I think you will struggle to burn that roof in. It will go grey and muddy. It's just a tiny comment on an otherwise fine image. Don't worry about it too much.

Paul
xwang 11 56 8
18 Dec 2011 10:40AM
Ok, thank you Paul. I was just about to do it, I do take your words seriouslyWinkGrin

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