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Autumn

By Szturmowiec
Leszno - Polska / Poland.

Spontaneous street portrait.

fotograf leszno

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Tags: Bike Autumn Fog Poland Black and white

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5 Nov 2012 6:21PM
It's a great pity that I can't vote on this pictute. A great image, well done. Pete

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Franko59 5 3 1 England
5 Nov 2012 6:23PM
Great capture,,,regards Ian
5 Nov 2012 6:32PM
love this shot. Composition is just perfect. What was it like in colour ?...Peter
marktc 5 85 14 United Kingdom
5 Nov 2012 7:25PM
A superb and wonderful composition, beautiful light and wonderful timing with the falling leaves
MandyG 4 2 England
5 Nov 2012 7:27PM
I really want to vote on this. JUST WONDERFUL! SmileSmileSmile
Would like to have seen it in colour too.
MandyG
pablophotographer 5 628 253
5 Nov 2012 7:36PM
Excellent timing, colouring, framing and composition. Congratulations Szturmowiec.

Long live Gmoch!
5 Nov 2012 7:41PM
great light and framing.

dave
banehawi Plus
12 1.4k 3461 Canada
5 Nov 2012 7:52PM
An excellent shot, and obviously popular. The scene is gorgeous, the timing perfect for the man on the bike, the exposure great for a silhouette.

A question, more than a comment, - there are many black spots on the shot, including, lower right, what appears to be a water drop. Was it shot through a car window, or was there some rain, or was the lens in need of a clean? Its worth cleaning these up as its such a good image.


Its possible to use the highlight tool in Photoshop CS to improve or enhance the light rays by reducing the light reflection, - Ive done this in the mod, and cleaned up the spots.

What do you think about cropping a little from the left, so we see only the large tree, the road, and the man?


Regards


Willie
fazzer Plus
7 54 7 United Kingdom
5 Nov 2012 7:58PM
excellent love it
Leilani 11 29 3 England
5 Nov 2012 9:19PM
Brilliant! Love the scene and especially the falling leaves! Fabulous capture Smile
5 Nov 2012 9:44PM
Yea. That "rocks" even sooc.
Focus_Man 6 481 631 United Kingdom
6 Nov 2012 9:24AM
Very nice moody shot.
paulbroad 8 114 1034 United Kingdom
7 Nov 2012 10:02PM
This is a critique section and only Willie has said the obvious. This has the basis of a superb composition but it has loads of strange black dots, some other artefacts and about a stop over exposure.

Please, don't just look at content, look at technique and processing.

Is your sensor that dirty. It would have to be terribly so to show at f4. So is it through a window which was rather dirty?

Paul

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