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Azores Fishermen - 10ND

By vsridharis
Azores fisherman on roack ..Ocean fishing Grin

Tags: Landscape Sea Ocean Azores Landscape and travel Azores HDR

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dudler Plus
15 861 1489 England
19 Apr 2019 8:10PM
It's really difficult to see what's going on with a DSLR and a heavy ND filter - but there's no excuse for leaving a tilted horizon in processing... Seascapes show the slightest tilt, and it just looks wrong.

There's an exposure issue, as well, with blown highlights and slightly blocked shadows, as well.

And, if you want milky seas, you probalby need to lower hte ISO and increase the exposure time a bit further.

I wonder if a long lens would work better - I had to look hard to find the fisherman.

Are there any areas of hte picture on which you particularly want feedback? If so, please say - the more you tell us, the more we can help.

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mrswoolybill Plus
12 1.5k 2054 United Kingdom
19 Apr 2019 9:32PM
Hi, I think it's the first time that you have ticked for critique, I hope that it was intentional and that you will find it useful. But we need to know more from you - what were you intending to capture, how do you see the image? What advice do you want?

First point - the sea does not slope. Full stop. With any image that includes a dominant horizontal or vertical line it's important to check it against the grid and rotate if necessary. Make that an essential part of your workflow!

Next, do you check the histogram? A brief check would indicate issues here. The Exif indicates that this was taken at lunch time, not ideal light... Overhead sun shining down on water, that's not ideal conditions for a 3 second exposure.

Thirdly, the title indicates that you see the fishermen as significant, but the use of wide angle pushes then so far away that they are scarcely identifiable in the frame.

We need to hear more from you, what you want to achieve, what you want from the Critique Gallery. Meanwhile I shall try a quick modification, it will appear in due course under the Modifications button below your upload. Tweaks to exposure, contrast, and a crop I think...
Moira
19 Apr 2019 11:14PM
Ditto the above.
I see you state your photographic level as "Semi Pro."
paulbroad Plus
11 127 1282 United Kingdom
20 Apr 2019 7:25AM
As above. I think you need to go back to basics a bit. Some real rooky errors here as mentioned above.

Paul
20 Apr 2019 8:20AM
good points and thank you. will remember .. had never noticed the critique button until now

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