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banehawi Plus
13 1.6k 3682 Canada
14 Nov 2011 3:55PM
Its a nice image Arnold. I like the toning, and the dramatic sky. Im sure your original looks a little sharper than the image here, - which is slightly soft, and if thats the case, then you need to check the new resized image for sharpness BEFORE you upload. Just open it, check sharpness, sharpen as needed, save and then upload.

I would suggest lowering the building a little (more sky at the top) and moving it a little more to the right, - just improves the composition.

Ive loaded a mod with that done, and also some variations on toning that might also suit.



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paulbroad 9 123 1161 United Kingdom
16 Nov 2011 7:41PM
Initially quite impressive but then I find myself wondering what I'm looking at. The vignetting pulls you in to the very central bar sign but then what? Looks rather un bar like - but that's probably the point.


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