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Beautiful Girl

By Dori
A girl in field.

Tags: Portraits and people

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maryg 7 66 18 Scotland
2 Oct 2009 8:36PM
Love your use of light and shade, beautiful detail in the field .
Mary

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TRUEX 9 218 10
2 Oct 2009 8:39PM
The hair across the face is a big distraction,if you don't mind me saying......
banehawi Plus
12 1.4k 3492 Canada
3 Oct 2009 12:26AM
Welcome to EPZ Dori.

This is a really beautiful shot. The colours are gorgeous, and the timing of the girl running through the wheat is well done.


The light is behind the girl, so her face is a little dark, and this can easily be corrected in Photoshop. That hair across her face can be cloned out also.

I would also suggest a crop to more her off centre, to give the impression of her running into the frame.

I have loaded a mod with these adjustments, hope you find them useful.


Regards


Willie
malc_c 10 2 167 England
3 Oct 2009 12:42PM
Hi Dori, and welcome to epz!
Nice first image and great move putting it into crit.

I can't really add too much to Willie's crit, but have posted a different interpretation. I softened the cereal but kept the little girl's features sharp by using a layer mask. Also cropped the frame so she is running into the middle picture roughly from the third, and lightened her face of course. I rather like the stray hair myself as I think it helps show movement, so I left it.

BTW, let us know what you think of the mods
malcolm
NEWMANP Plus
8 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
3 Oct 2009 8:10PM
hello,
lovely shot of the girl playing in the field, the colours are lovely and i like the picture a lot,
just a couple of niggles in that there is a distracting strand across the girls face and the composition would be improved by placing the figure nearer to the top third to give space to move into the image.
best regards,
Phil

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