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Beavertail State Park

By jlbissette13
I took a road trip up to Rhode Island recently to see the rocks they have on the coast there. They were amazing! This is at Beavertail State Park in Jamestown. Thanks for any constructive criticism!

1/2 sec, f/9, ISO 200

Tags: General Landscape and travel Wildlife and nature

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saeidNL 11 3 Netherlands
16 Dec 2010 10:07PM
Great shot,well done,
saeid
richmowil Plus
12 446 2 England
16 Dec 2010 11:07PM
Like this image - in particular the movement it portrays
frz67 11 10 32 Italy
17 Dec 2010 5:59AM
like it very much with the long shutter aperture giving the sense of wave's motion.
I just see two small issues with this.
the first one is a lack of contrast, the overall picture appears a bit flat and washed out, so to speak;
the second is a slight red cast.
Uploaded a mod in which the contrast has been enhanced, mainly by darkening the shadows, and the cast reduced.

hope it helps

francesco
DRicherby 12 269 726 United Kingdom
17 Dec 2010 7:57PM
You have a good amount of blur here — the motion is clearly indicated but the water hasn't been made to look like milk as it sometimes does. However, the shot as a whole doesn't work for me because the composition lacks any focal point. You say that the rocks were amazing but you've barely included them in the frame. Sad
wolf1964 15 5 United Kingdom
19 Dec 2010 4:14PM
This caught my eye and dragged my full attention to it Smile It's a lovely shot. It's fun to play with water eh? Smile

There's a white spec or two near the top? and One half way - they tend to drag the eye away a little. I'd advise cloning those out. The one's lower down don't matter as much. I used to get stuff like that happening all the time in Cornwall Smile

Other than that - it's a top shot.

All the best

Wolf

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