Bench, Marks

By ardbeg77  
I guess this is one of those "make something out of nothing" shots. Bridlington, dull day, found this set up near the harbour, and saw something in the combination of angles and textures.

Comments and critique welcome,

Thanks for looking!

Steve

Tags: Bench Texture Monochrome Black and white Railings Angles Geometry


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bliba Plus
14 2 Austria
23 Jul 2019 9:59AM
great mono work - very well composed Wink

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ardbeg77 Plus
15 1.2k 7 United Kingdom
23 Jul 2019 10:20AM
Thanks Ollie - I think this one may be a bit niche - even for EPZ Smile!
Steve
mac Plus
18 3 Scotland
23 Jul 2019 11:53AM
I think the main problem (for my limited knowledge) is the separation between the white rail and the seats. The vast empty foreground, I would have been tempted to do a prune from below the seat making it more a letter box format. They do all lead you up to the left which is good.
Ian
ardbeg77 Plus
15 1.2k 7 United Kingdom
23 Jul 2019 12:27PM
Thanks for the detailed and useful comment , Ian. I can see what you mean and I'll give it a go. I wanted to get more angle to this but was "physically constrained" (too old to bend any further over the railing Smile) I felt the ground had enough texture to hold it together - but I can see entirely where you're coming form and would agree to some extent.

Thanks again - always good to hear suggestions!

Steve
FotoDen 3 7 Germany
24 Jul 2019 9:06AM
Nice. I would have cropped it above the bit of angle iron at the bottom left.
ardbeg77 Plus
15 1.2k 7 United Kingdom
24 Jul 2019 10:03AM
Thanks Peter - yes I can see that would have helped - thanks for the suggestion.
Steve
Chinga Plus
9 3 1 United Kingdom
25 Jul 2019 5:28AM
Good concept... Excellent work...
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