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Big eyes

By Malfun
Experimenting with off camera flash. The flash head was off to the left with the flash head stuck in a milk bottle and set at 1/4 power. I focused the camera in a dark room by shining a torch light on the cats face to allowing autofocus to focus on the eye. I needed the cat to look to the right to ensure both eyes were lit.

Tags: Sophie Cats Pets Pets and captive animals

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Chinga Plus
10 3 2 United Kingdom
16 Jan 2015 12:37PM
I think it's a lovely portrait, sharp, great eye contact and with good details
IB
paulbroad 13 131 1293 United Kingdom
16 Jan 2015 1:32PM
Sounds a bit complicated to me, but it worked. A fine cat shot in all respects. Others, look!

Paul
mrswoolybill Plus
14 2.7k 2396 United Kingdom
16 Jan 2015 2:06PM
Hi Mal, welcome to the Critique Gallery, I think it's your first upload here. You've been on the site for a few years though so I guess you know what we're about...

Thanks for the very detailed description of your set-up, I like the carefully thought-out mix of sophistication and improvisation. The uses one can make of a milk bottle...

The main thing is that it's worked, and the main surprise is that the cat co-operated! They are not the most compliant of sitters.

I like the angle and crop, everything sits very comfortably in the frame, occupies it in the way that cats do occupy a space on their own terms.

Settings all look eminently suitable and sensible. Aperture just right to have the face nicely in focus, soften the background fur. Shutter speed fast enough to freeze even the most vigorous purring.

The one detail that slightly jars for me is that the catchlights are placed differently in the eyes, and that is very easily addressed with the clone tool.

I would also like to add just a tiny bit of brightness and contrast, the fur look a wee bit grubby. I'll be back soon.

I guess you know where modifications appear, under the button below your upload, click on the thumbnail to view.
Moira
16 Jan 2015 2:07PM
lovely big eyes
banehawi Plus
16 2.4k 4229 Canada
16 Jan 2015 2:51PM
Youve done a very good job mal, and great use for a milk bottle.

In the RAW post processing, I would increase the colour temp to about 5300, and the exposure, which you did increase, by another +0.5. Reduce blacks to -25, - this improves contrast significantly.


Thats the basis of the mod Ive uploaded, which also has sharpening, and mid tone contrast adjusted in PS.


Regards



Willie
dudler Plus
17 1.6k 1833 England
17 Jan 2015 2:57PM
All the ingredients are there, and Willie's mod really nails it.
17 Jan 2015 4:25PM
Nice cat shot. I agree about the catchlights. Can't quite make my mind up if the cat is looking directly at the viewer? Looks like it is looking slightly to the side.
Malfun 8
17 Jan 2015 10:58PM
Thank you all for your constructive comments, I'll take them on board and I am sure it will help me improve as a photographer.

cheers
Mal
what a beautiful cat portrait, such lovely eyes. SmileSmileSmileSmile
BRITCHIE

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