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Bosham Bay

By kbtimages    
Taken while visiting Bognor Regis

Tags: Sunset Water Boat Transport Bay West sussex Landscape and travel Night and low light

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Jestertheclown Plus
7 7.1k 249 England
16 Aug 2010 11:15PM
I adjusted the white balance in Lightroom which took some of the saturation out of the sunset.
Then on to CS5.
I lassoed the whole of the black bit at the bottom and adjusted shadows/highlights, levels, brightness and contrast in varying degrees.
Then I cropped to remove some of the foreground and (hopefully!) improve the balance of the shot.
Finally I straightened it using a ruler across the horizon.

Hope it's OK.

Bren.

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paulbroad 8 108 987 United Kingdom
17 Aug 2010 8:03AM
The mod is a great improvement - you must watch the horizon - should never lean. The problem was the foreground - very heavy and lacking any detail.

Paul

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