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Branching Out

By Philo
Second offering from our hols in Turkey. This time Megan perched on the branch of a tree at the edge of the beach as the sun goes down.
Many thanks again for the critique on the last shot.
Phil

Tags: Tree Branch Turkey Warm light Kusadasi Portraits and people

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NDODS Plus
5 4.9k 125 United Kingdom
25 Aug 2012 10:45AM
Personally I can't really fault this rather charming and somewhat well captured photograph. Good use of the natural light.

Regards Nathan

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Philo Plus
6 99 83 England
25 Aug 2012 11:13AM
Thanks Nathan, appreciate the comment.
Phil
Sooty_1 6 1.5k 219 United Kingdom
25 Aug 2012 2:05PM
She looks comfortable and relaxed (though a little round-shouldered...). Exposure looks good - whites held perfectly, composition good, focus spot-on.
Aperture could be slightly smaller so the tree branch is all in focus, but that's minor, and the background is well out of focus, as it should be.

Great family shot, and one that's a keeper

Nick
paulbroad 8 114 1033 United Kingdom
25 Aug 2012 4:38PM
Thats so much better. The branch is the prop and sne looks relaxed and happy. This doesn't try and make a pretty young girl into a glamour model. Unfortunately, they do that for themselves later!

Paul
chensuriashi Plus
10 231 17 England
25 Aug 2012 5:46PM
Nice shot much better than the last two and I took out some of the red Highlights with CtrlB nearly sharpened the freckles but that's just me, left them for her to decide on that one...

Thanks for sharing Chen.
JackAllTog Plus
7 4.4k 58 United Kingdom
25 Aug 2012 5:59PM
Hi Phi, Super family photo, Great evening light, but not much of it on her face.
I think you have chosen to blur the background at max ISO and f2.5, but maybe you could perhaps have stepped down more to get more of her hand and the upright branch in focus. That same upright branch has a distracting highlight on it. Maybe she could have leant her back against the branch to hide it and move her face round into the sunlight?
I'd also consider adjusting her nail polish to a skin tone as i think she'd be better with none.
Its still a nice shot none-the-less.
Kind Regards, Stuart.
Philo Plus
6 99 83 England
25 Aug 2012 7:55PM
Thanks everyone, I hoped this one would be better received as I really like it. To be honest I didn't think too much about getting the branch in focus at the time.
Stuart, I see your point about the highlight on the branch but it doesn't really bother me. You are perhaps right about facing the light but I fear that would just make her squint (I will probably upload an example of this). I like the idea of changing the nail polish, especially as it is a bit worn by this stage.
Thanks for the mod Chen, very subtle.
Phil
banehawi Plus
12 1.4k 3457 Canada
25 Aug 2012 10:58PM
Youve got her eyes looking at you with catchlights in this one, - makes a difference.


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Philo Plus
6 99 83 England
25 Aug 2012 11:19PM
Thanks, Willie, proper natural catchlights tooGrin
Phil
Focus_Man 6 481 631 United Kingdom
26 Aug 2012 9:58AM
Lovely family record piucture Phil. Like a few before me I would have chosen a slightly smaller aperture, as the background is sufficiently distant to still be rendered out of focus.

Frank
Philo Plus
6 99 83 England
26 Aug 2012 2:33PM
Thanks, Frank, the smaller aperture seems to be popular. Think I may start bracketing some shots at different apertures.
Phil

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