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Bristol & Worcester

By Ashleigh_SHLEE  

Tags: Architecture Landscape and travel

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pamelajean Plus
16 1.8k 2263 United Kingdom
16 Nov 2011 10:33PM
Hello, Ashleigh, and welcome to EPZ. The sky is interesting, there is nice light on the church tower, and the walking couple give a nice bit of human interest, BUT the tilt doesn't work for me. With no description from you, it is impossible to know if the tilt was deliberate or not. Personally, I like a bit of quirkiness in an image, love diagonals on abstract style pictures, and have also seen some scenes that warrant a tilt, but I don't feel that it works on this one because of the obvious slant of the church tower, which looks as if it is falling over. I will try a modification.
Pamela.
PS: I managed to straighten the church, it's not perfect though. I also adjusted highlights, shadows and levels in order to enhance the sky.
paulbroad Plus
15 131 1294 United Kingdom
18 Nov 2011 5:05PM
Good try. When you go this wide you will get convergence - what you should do is angle the camera to get the same lean on each side. Some will try and straighten verticals, and I have no problem with that, but sometimes strong leaning works well, and could here, but it needs to be on both sides if you intend it.

Paul

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