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By youmightlikethis

Tags: General Specialist and abstract

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joelrouse 9 27 United Kingdom
30 May 2011 6:51PM
Very cool. Like this!

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Merlin_k Plus
9 13 12 United States
30 May 2011 7:00PM
Firstly, I prefer the colour version at the moment but I believe that the mono should be better. What holds me back on the mono is that there is some clear marking around the top and bottom of the frame whcih shows that the brush hasn't been applied to the whole of the tryptic. The light grey at the top and bottom is distracting. In addition I find the entire contrast in the mono is overdone.
Secondly, I love the concept and putting it into a tryptic. However, the distance closer between the first and second is not the same as the second and third. I think that what you have done is halve the distance and then halve it again (counting the pillars on the far side you have 6 before the first arch in picture one, 3 in pcture 2 and 1.5 in picture 3). I think it would have been better to have either moved or zoomed the same distance both times. I'm guessing it's zoom as I think you must be standing out on a beam.
Canonshots 7 172 13 United Kingdom
31 May 2011 11:26AM
Regarding the first two versions, mono beats colour as far as I am concerned. The colour version is almost mono anyway. Version 3 is something else. It really blew me away. The use of words to make a visual point rarely works, but you have brought it off splendidly here.

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