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Bubbles 2

By Sone  
What do you guys think this is, and how well did i do it in these conditions?
Ok I will tell you. hehe. My boyfriend and I were washing my car (him outside, me inside) when i spotted this. This was taken inside my Kia Picanto. This is the sunroof with water droplets on. I jumped out stopping him from changing this pattern, ran into the house, got my camera and this was the result. What are your opinions? This was edited in photoshop, some changes to contrast and Hue/saturation.

Tags: Close-up and macro Water droplets

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15 Jul 2013 10:48AM
I like your second bubbles image - you're certainly making the most of this photo opportunity!
Bit out of my comfort zone but, maybe you could play with different colours in each bubble, or do the same with the background - maybe use different textures?
Just a few thoughts!

Richard

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mrswoolybill Plus
9 841 1372 United Kingdom
15 Jul 2013 7:47PM
I missed the first upload, life has been busy in the last few days, I'll go back to it because I like this a lot. Abstracts are right up my street.
Things that I like - the random shapes of the blobs, reminiscent of O Level Biology fifty years ago and the private life of the amoeba; the cool, icy, metallic blue; the hint of gradation from darker down to lighter blue.
Things that I'd change:
I would like to get rid of various dots and drops within the rings, abstracts like this need to look clean.
I'd maybe add a bit more clarity, to enhance the translucent effect, and the gradation.
And really I want this to be a true square - it's not quite square, which to me look a bit flabby, unsatisfactory. Square contains an abstract so tidily, frames it.
Mod to follow.
Oh and very well seen, that's the important thing. My home page lists the human eye as my favourite gadget...
Moira
mrswoolybill Plus
9 841 1372 United Kingdom
15 Jul 2013 8:48PM
Looking at your previous upload I much prefer this one - cleaner-looking and a more satisfying arrangement of blobs.
darkocv 5 13 Macedonia
6 Aug 2013 4:52PM
nice and clean picture, full of deatail with gentle color, i like it
pozdrav Darko

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