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By padma_cpwd
a very near shot on a butterfly with out zooming
i enjoyed this shot.

Tags: Wildlifeandnature Close-up and macro Wildlife and nature Close-upandmacro

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pamelajean Plus
12 1.1k 2023 United Kingdom
18 Sep 2010 5:04PM
Very nice, Padma, good detail on every part of the butterfly and twig. The background may be a bit fussy, but it is nicely blurred. My only niggle is your composition. I would like to see the butterfly lower in the frame and with less space behind it. It's a good idea to leave space in the area into which the butterfly is facing/looking, and here I would say it is to the top and the right.
Jestertheclown 9 7.7k 252 England
18 Sep 2010 9:09PM
This is really very good.

As Pamela has said, the composition could be improved, preferably at the time of shooting but there's room for improvement in the shot as it is.
I've uploaded a mod. in which I've cropped it and sharpened it slightly.
Ideally, you'd need a bit more room on the right but then, things are rarely ideal!
Just my opinion, hope you don't mind.



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