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Café Marienstübchen

By phonocar
As you can see the house and the tower are the main objectives in this Pictures. I darkend the upper corners a bit, everything else is pretty much unchanged.

Tags: Architecture Cafe Landscape and travel

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paulbroad 8 114 1034 United Kingdom
8 Apr 2013 8:42PM
A fine clean architectural pictorial record. Darkening corners works for me. I always emphasise fill the frame but I might have taken a couple of steps back here and included a bit more foreground and sides.

Paul

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pamelajean Plus
10 958 1818 United Kingdom
9 Apr 2013 6:30PM
A perfect record of the cafe, Sebastian, and nothing really wrong with the composition and amount of detail.
I can't help wanting to see someone sitting on one of those seats with a cup of tea, or someone about to venture through the green wooden door.
To be picky, the verticals are slightly out, and I've rectified that in my modification.
I agree with Paul about stepping back because, although your subjects are the house and tower, they are a little tight in the frame, and a bit more of the surrounding area would give them some breathing space. Also done in the modification, just for you to see the difference it makes.
Pamela.
9 Apr 2013 8:30PM
Thank you for your modification I like it Wink

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