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Cafe.

By paulbroad
Not sure about this at all, so general opinion, please. Fails on rules of composition but hought it had some impact. Cropped to remove a lot of nothing, top and bottom. Through doors of Spa Cafe, Bridlington.

EOS 40D with 10/20 Sigma. About 20mm actual. f8, aperture priority. -2/3 stop comp. ISO400.

Paul

Tags: Silhouette Panoramic Cafe Portraits and people

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paulbroad Plus
9 123 1111 United Kingdom
7 Jan 2013 8:16AM
Sorry, not Spa for those who know Brid. Jerome's.

Paul

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7 Jan 2013 8:45AM
There is an awful lot going on and competing for attention...but I like it.
banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3587 Canada
7 Jan 2013 4:15PM
It depends on what you might think is going on. It looks like a lonely couple in an large empty space, so it may speak to some people. I have made it b&w, straightened and sharpened for a more stark looking image. Im not sure either.


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Sooty_1 Plus
6 1.5k 220 United Kingdom
7 Jan 2013 11:26PM
I think there's too much clutter...all the lines compete for attention, but they aren't clearly defined enough and at odd angles. To me it looks like a big empty space too, and isolating the people against the windows, cutting out extraneous stuff would work better, I think.

Nick

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