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Camel at Knowsley Safari Park

By daveplatt
Snapped this through the car window from about 10 metres away, he (or she) was just staring blankly at me with a bit of a Kenneth Williams face..

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Comments


BarbaraR 10 17 1 England
1 Feb 2012 8:59AM
Smile Oh I say, what a face.
That's super, great capture.

B.

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mhfore 9 6 176 England
1 Feb 2012 9:03AM
Great amusing image Dave, well shot. Smile

Martin
ugly Plus
8 9 57 United Kingdom
1 Feb 2012 9:48AM
A very nice detailed image...
Very sharp and it has nice texture...
Great comp...
A magic image well done...

Dave
cats_123 Plus
12 4.6k 26 Northern Ireland
1 Feb 2012 10:21AM
oooh missus!! WinkGrin
Jestertheclown 7 7.3k 249 England
1 Feb 2012 10:38AM
Good, isn't it ! ?

Shooting through the window probably didn't do you any favours but there's actually a pretty good shot in there. It just needs a little help!
At first glance, this looks slightly over exposed although I rather think that the effect is caused by the window.
The whites on his (her?) nose are blown but not lost forever.
I've added a mod. in which I've pushed the vibrance (quite a lot) and made a very quick tweak using the shadows/highlights tool.
Hopefully, you'll think it's an improvement!

Bren.

Edit; I sharpened it slightly too.
Chinga Plus
5 3 1 United Kingdom
1 Feb 2012 11:20AM
Handsome! GrinGrinGrin IB
MattK 4 63 United Kingdom
1 Feb 2012 3:42PM
pucker up!!
banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3511 Canada
1 Feb 2012 4:49PM
What a fantastic pose and great timing!

A few small tweaks can improve it; the colour is a little cool overall, - a little warmer looks better to me at least; tone down the whites over the nose as Bren suggests; sharpen a little.; and for a better composition, add some space to the right as in the mod.




Regards



Willie
Niknut Plus
6 1.3k 68 United Kingdom
1 Feb 2012 5:36PM
GrinGrinGrinGrin !!!!....great shot !!
1 Feb 2012 8:18PM
Once again thanks everyone for the comments and edit tips, much appreciated.
Dave.
Inner-Funk 10 17 2 Australia
2 Feb 2012 11:22AM
great expression, makes me laugh... brilliant, thanks amelia Smile
lfc1892 4 3
5 Feb 2012 1:27AM
Hilarious shot. Well seen.

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