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Carbonton Dam

By jlbissette13
This is what's left of the Carbonton Dam on the Deep River in North Carolina. The star trails are about 60, 10 second exposures stacked in Photoshop (I think anyway, I can't remember the exact number). The building and foreground is a 79 second exposure. The pink, yellow, and blue is from different colored gels on a Nikon sb-600. It was nearly a full moon. Thanks for any feedback!

Tags: Night Architecture Star trails Landscape and travel Flash and lighting

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NDODS 7 5.1k 125 United Kingdom
10 Apr 2012 8:18AM
A wonderful photograph, wonderfully executed, love the write up.

Regards Nathan

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paskinmj 8 11 1 United Kingdom
10 Apr 2012 8:25AM
Nice long exposure.
Matt
caromal 8 8 United Kingdom
10 Apr 2012 8:39AM
A real gem.
Sooty_1 7 1.5k 221 United Kingdom
10 Apr 2012 9:12AM
Good image - good balance between light sources, though I would never have known what it was without the intro.
I would have liked a little less grass in the foregound (but without a digger, that might have been hard!) and more startrails ( a wider view, but you are already as wide as your lens can go), so these are nitpicks.

Nick
banehawi Plus
13 1.7k 3781 Canada
10 Apr 2012 4:55PM
Well done shot. Love the coloured gel idea, and the star trails have worked out very nicely.

You might try darkening the foreground, and bringing along that backhoe would have been a nice touch!

Uploaded a mod with the foreground darkened and de saturated, and removed the wires.



Regards


Willie
paulbroad 10 123 1198 United Kingdom
10 Apr 2012 5:52PM
Veryt well done - not much I would want different.

Paul
10 Apr 2012 7:21PM
Very creative photography. Well done, an excellent capture.
Gerryrys 5 1 United Kingdom
10 Apr 2012 8:57PM
A huge amount of work for one picture! Worth every minute. Grin

Gerry
Jestertheclown 9 7.6k 252 England
10 Apr 2012 9:24PM
Hasn't this, or something very similar, been here before?
10 Apr 2012 10:31PM
Thanks everyone!

@banehawi I really like your mod, I'm definitely going to darken the foreground some.

@Jestertheclown I uploaded a shot from here that was taken on a different night about a month ago. It was taken from a different angle, and it didn't have star trails. It's a few shots back in my portfolio if you want to see it.
Jestertheclown 9 7.6k 252 England
10 Apr 2012 10:39PM
Aha!
I thought it rang a bell. Should have looked, shouldn't I . . .? !
SueEley 11 279 96 Wales
12 Apr 2012 6:25PM
I think it's great - and that bit of darkness and contrast was the only thing it needed.

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