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Tooth 12 5.8k 227 Ireland
9 Feb 2007 12:16AM
I quite like this, it has a quirky cartoon-like feel. A good exercise in exposure control with the diffrent shades of grey in the background. A nice balanced comp. also. I'm not sure why actually, but I really like it..


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poso 12 1
19 Mar 2007 12:18PM
Dear Takra

I looked at this photograph more than once. Actually I waited a little to see how you would continue after the CCTV image.

On it's own I think the TV image is quite solitary. It does not seem to be opposed or counteracted upon by anything else. It is not part of a series with a continuing idea.

That is what I think: it belongs in a series to mean something as opposed to other images. I miss that "other" images in your portfolio, which is clearly shown by your MyPhotoAlbum website. Contrary to many images shown there your CCTV has unique characteristics: the triangle in the back, a misshaped image on the tube it self, some shades.

MyPhotoAlbum: the product shots are very clean but could also be photographed in a way resembling the CCTV which would work very much OK.

Succes and greetings from poso

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