Save & earn with MPB; trade-in and buy pre-loved
Comments
hmmm I wonder if you could've avoided the pronounced shadow over her left eye with a reflector .... it doesn't seem to harsh but, in my eyes, it just looks a bit odd...
Looking at her pose, i'm just now thinking maybe your point of view wasn't the best ... i'm thinking her keep the same pose while you moving in a way so that you frame her face between her arms with fill-flash, from below, slightly closer to exagerate perspective
A variation would be her then to turn her face towards you so youd have had two shots: 1 side face, another front face both framed between her arms while still keeping the
Hope you take this constructively as I know I've got an extreme critique eye sometimes!
Looking at her pose, i'm just now thinking maybe your point of view wasn't the best ... i'm thinking her keep the same pose while you moving in a way so that you frame her face between her arms with fill-flash, from below, slightly closer to exagerate perspective
A variation would be her then to turn her face towards you so youd have had two shots: 1 side face, another front face both framed between her arms while still keeping the Hope you take this constructively as I know I've got an extreme critique eye sometimes!
