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11 Jan 2012 12:21AM
hmmm I wonder if you could've avoided the pronounced shadow over her left eye with a reflector .... it doesn't seem to harsh but, in my eyes, it just looks a bit odd...

Looking at her pose, i'm just now thinking maybe your point of view wasn't the best ... i'm thinking her keep the same pose while you moving in a way so that you frame her face between her arms with fill-flash, from below, slightly closer to exagerate perspective Smile A variation would be her then to turn her face towards you so youd have had two shots: 1 side face, another front face Smile both framed between her arms while still keeping the

Hope you take this constructively as I know I've got an extreme critique eye sometimes! Smile
sherring 14 46 13 United Kingdom
11 Jan 2012 9:03AM
I have to agree about that shadow, but a nice shot all the same.

A Booth 19 11 4 United Kingdom
11 Jan 2012 10:26AM
Sorry, lovely girl nicely posed, but the shadow caused by the hat angle spoils it.
Richsr 15 91 223 England
11 Jan 2012 1:25PM
Some good feedbac from gonzalito.
Regards Richard
Balwant Plus
11 1 6 United Kingdom
13 Jan 2012 4:33PM
Good pose, however I do agree regarding the comments alreadt made about the shadows which in my opinion can be elemenated using a reflector.

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