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Cimanuk River

By arhab
I hope there were something in the river like boat or fisherman. But none of them present. So, i hope the pillar giving something interest. Comment and critique welcome

Tags: Landscape and travel

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Focus_Man 8 481 631 United Kingdom
19 Oct 2012 11:45AM
Your initial self-assessment is very good, just that bit of focal point required.

The vignetting is strange unless your lens hood is a little too long for the lens in use.

I have uploaded a mod where I have changed the format a little and have brighteend it up a bit and removed a lot of noise, as well as cloning out the vignetting.


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paulbroad 10 123 1238 United Kingdom
19 Oct 2012 4:23PM
You have made your own comment. There is no real composition and you absolutely needed that subject on the bottom right third.

arhab 6 43 2 Indonesia
22 Oct 2012 1:19AM
Thank you Frank, Paul.

The vignet is showing itself. I do not use lens hood but i took the image under the shade of tree. And the mod is briliant the color more vibrant, i like it. somehow my eyes can not see as you all. Grin i even can not see the noise, i hope, i do not have to wait until 10 years to have a vision like you all Wink

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