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CLOUDS IN CONVERSATION

By youmightlikethis
recent pic up for crit pic shows local scene clydebank canal

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LynneJoyce Plus
14 22 101 United Kingdom
30 Nov 2011 6:41PM
I much prefer the colour version as the mono seems much too harsh for my tastes, so I am posting my own B&W version.
30 Nov 2011 7:24PM
thanks for crit and mod
Fefe Plus
10 74 41 United Kingdom
30 Nov 2011 8:08PM
Very dramatic. I like it. Checked out the mod from LynneJoyce.... like that too. Oo just spotted colour version . Yes i like it.Wink
strokebloke 13 493 17 England
30 Nov 2011 9:36PM
I too like the colour version.
I also like Lynne's mod - much less stressful Smile
The mod brings out detail which was virtually lost in the original.
If, however, impact is what you were aiming for; you've hit the nail on the head GrinGrin

Jack
ianrobinson 12 1.2k 8 United Kingdom
1 Dec 2011 9:20PM
hi done a mod on the colour version, personally i don't like the processing of the Mono, it is way too harsh.
What i mean by harsh is there is too much grain or noise in it, it is also too contrasty if it is impact you want then try much less.
I have chosen the colour image to play with first and i tweaked a few things to produce what i moded for you, hope you like it.

Firstly i took the noise and grain out then i sharpened the image in unsharp mask, then i did some tweeks in the curves menu with the eye droppers to correct the colours and exposure, then i cropped slightly to get rid of a distracting black line on the right side of the original, then i adjusted the horizon line to be in the centre line and not just off as it was, and that was that.

hope this is helpful to you.

b&w version coming up.

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